Wednesday, 7 August 2013

Paragraph 1 - Oops, I Did it Again

Here is a VERY rough draft of my first paragraph. It's sitting at 491 words as of this post, and the referencing is the same as what I used for my notes, as I am on my laptop and I don't have a word processing program which supports such advanced features. I would love feedback, as I'm not sure if I've talked enough about the removal of destabilising people through the proscriptions. Also, have a feeling I need more primary source material in my essay, but to be frank, Plutarch is neither useful nor helpful, as his work focuses largely on Sulla as a person, providing little other than background information.


The Great Proscription was mostly beneficial to Sulla's attempts to stabilise the Roman Republic, though its misuse detracted from its effectiveness in his endeavor  It was a masterpiece of legislation, allowing Sulla to replenish the treasury which had been reduced significantly in size to fund Marius's side of the Civil War, securing the future of the Roman economy, whilst allowing Sulla to remove the elements of Roman society he believed were sources of dissent and instability within the republic. That is not to say that he was unjust in his proscriptions; not all those who supported Marius in a physical or financial manner were added to the list, for those in Sulla's sights were people, “whose only offense was their wealth” (2, 264), rather than those he would have reason to seek revenge against. The proscription and subsequent deaths of almost five thousand citizens, “filled the public treasury to overflowing” (2, 265), despite the allocation of, “two talents” (4, 182), each to those who fulfilled the bounty on a proscribed, and the low prices put on the auctioned property. Furthermore, through the sale, “to allied and friendly cities their freedom” (8), that which for most had been lost over the entire military career of Sulla and Marius, a total of three hundred and fifty million sesterces were added to the Roman coffers, as calculated by Beesly. In the freeing of these cities and in the acquirement of property by individuals at these bargain prices, Sulla, “bound buyers to his interests” (4, 183), ensuring support for future changes made under his dictatorship. The proscription was however abused to some extent, an unavoidable occurrence due to the many debts accrued by Sulla over the course of the Civil War. Through Sulla's secretary, Chrysogonus, it was possible for Sextus Roscius of Ameria to be proscribed, “murdered by two of his kinsmen” (2, 264), and then through further bribery, have his innocent son, “charged...with having killed his father” (4, 182). So too was it possible for Lucius Sergius Catilina to, “legalis[e] his position” (2, 264), and further his political career through the proscription of his brother. It is unlikely that Sulla intended for such abuse of his proscriptions, by the very nature of the goal of stability he sought, as these actions, “unravel[led]...the fabric of law and order [Sulla] was attempting to weave” (2, 265). Indeed, it is evident that he made attempts, however weak, to combat such negative influences on the stability he was trying to bring, blocking Crassus from any further official employment after his seizing of unofficially proscribed property. More severe, and justified, action was unavailable to Sulla for Baker claims he, “ow[ed] a great many people too much” (2, 265), to go against their interests too severely, an action which would cause more instability than that done by the abuse of the proscriptions alone. Therefore, Sulla's inability to stop the abuse of the Great Proscription detracted from its ability to increase the stability of the Roman Republic under Sulla's dictatorship.

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